Date: 10/19/2014 - 06:50 am Title: epilogue
I liked this story.
Date: 01/12/2014 - 02:51 pm Title: epilogue
Really, really nice story. Only it does need some editing: a few grammar errors and sorely in need of punctuation, especially commas. But dialogue was really good. Enjoyed the read.
Date: 02/06/2013 - 04:50 pm Title: epilogue
I liked this story, the character interaction and how the storyline evolved.
Date: 02/06/2013 - 04:38 pm Title: Part five
A strong chapter.
Date: 01/24/2013 - 08:54 pm Title: Part one
Really enjoying this, the gentle thoughtful calm lying over it all has a real sombre S7 feel to it. I'm thinking I prefer yours so far. :)
Date: 01/23/2013 - 04:59 pm Title: Part four
That felt so tragic for Laura.
Date: 01/23/2013 - 04:42 pm Title: Part four
Too bad for Laura, but this means that we can have Illyria without losing Fred.
Date: 01/22/2013 - 06:42 am Title: Part three
Some good talk.
Date: 01/21/2013 - 02:06 pm Title: Part three
So good that she said it.
Date: 01/20/2013 - 04:58 pm Title: Part three
A good thing that Buffy realized that.
Date: 01/20/2013 - 04:48 pm Title: last of part two
Interesting.
Date: 01/20/2013 - 12:07 pm Title: Part two
It was nice to see Dawn.
Date: 01/20/2013 - 09:48 am Title: Part one
A good talk between them.
Date: 06/26/2011 - 11:15 am Title: epilogue
beautiful, beautiful story! I only wish there was more but, it was truly wonderful.
Date: 04/19/2011 - 08:52 pm Title: epilogue
Awesome story!!! Love all of your stories, just wish you would complete the ones you havent finished. I have been kept in suspense waiting on your others. Thank you so much for your wonderful writings. Keep it up!!!!
Date: 07/08/2008 - 08:24 am Title: epilogue
OK, if this story was posted in 2005 how come I've only just found it?
BRILLIANT!
I never understood why Buffy just went straight back to the house after they'd chucked her out and they never mentioned it again except the potential's 'we were being punished' comment.
Glad Buffy struck out on her own with Spike and then went and kicked Angel up the bum.
Outstanding 'what might have been' fic with totally realistic alternatives to everything that happened on the show. I'm just left wondering what happened to that poor old woman in the pyramid tomb... is she still waiting there........?
Date: 09/11/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: Part one
Hi! You were nominated at the Fang Fetish Awards for this fic, but the email we have for you bounced back. We only take nominations if an author accepts so if you would like your fic to be in this round email us and let us know that you accept, please.
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Date: 10/02/2006 - 04:00 pm Title: epilogue
Well for the Epiloge It would have been nice to see some interaction from the scoobies but I still think it left the story on a good note. Overall, I really liked it. It showed a new dynamic whith Angel helping Spike with his grief and Buffy being the bigger person sending Spike that way. When she sacrifices herself at the end for Connor when she could have walked away... wow. What else is there to say? It was a wonderful story! Bravo!
Date: 10/02/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Part four
I'm more for reviewing at the end but I figured i should say this her since this is where Im quoting from and really the only thing about the story that I noticed was off. Where Spike says, "Flash fried in a pillar of fire saving the world. I got better.", when they are talking about bringing Illyria back. In the timeline for this story that never happened. Buffy and Spike closed the hellmouth without him dying. The words for that part of the chapter were pullrd directly from Ats season 5, Ep: Shells, but the statement lacks continuity with the rest of the story. Ok I may have over done it with this big long paragraph so Im finished now.
Date: 07/23/2006 - 08:28 am Title: epilogue
What a great story! I was a bit frustrated at first when she told him after their night in the abandoned house that she didn't love him - because I thought that we actually had more spuffy in the Joss-verse than your story- but as the story progressed I got over it. I really think you built a believable story arc and the character development was strong. I was so sad and depressed reading the angst ridden parts during their four month separation. I just loved there moment of clarity and reunion in her hotel. Outstanding dialogue . His words to her about how he bled inside - rivaled the original speech in ' Touched' as far as I was concerned. I hope you continue to produce more fabulous stories like this one. Thanks
Date: 03/15/2006 - 12:56 am Title: epilogue
Just found and read this story. One or two inconsistencies in plot which I see other reviewers have pointed out but didnt detract from my enjoyment. Well written and it would be nice to see a sequel.please
Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:42 am Title: epilogue
Beautiful story! I'm so glad that Buffy didn't get screwed over by the Powers. :P She deserves her reward.
Well done. :)