Date: 10/19/2014 - 11:50 am Title: epilogue
I liked this story.
Date: 01/12/2014 - 07:51 pm Title: epilogue
Really, really nice story. Only it does need some editing: a few grammar errors and sorely in need of punctuation, especially commas. But dialogue was really good. Enjoyed the read.
Date: 02/06/2013 - 09:50 pm Title: epilogue
I liked this story, the character interaction and how the storyline evolved.
Date: 06/26/2011 - 04:15 pm Title: epilogue
beautiful, beautiful story! I only wish there was more but, it was truly wonderful.
Date: 04/20/2011 - 01:52 am Title: epilogue
Awesome story!!! Love all of your stories, just wish you would complete the ones you havent finished. I have been kept in suspense waiting on your others. Thank you so much for your wonderful writings. Keep it up!!!!
Date: 07/08/2008 - 01:24 pm Title: epilogue
OK, if this story was posted in 2005 how come I've only just found it?
BRILLIANT!
I never understood why Buffy just went straight back to the house after they'd chucked her out and they never mentioned it again except the potential's 'we were being punished' comment.
Glad Buffy struck out on her own with Spike and then went and kicked Angel up the bum.
Outstanding 'what might have been' fic with totally realistic alternatives to everything that happened on the show. I'm just left wondering what happened to that poor old woman in the pyramid tomb... is she still waiting there........?
Date: 10/02/2006 - 09:00 pm Title: epilogue
Well for the Epiloge It would have been nice to see some interaction from the scoobies but I still think it left the story on a good note. Overall, I really liked it. It showed a new dynamic whith Angel helping Spike with his grief and Buffy being the bigger person sending Spike that way. When she sacrifices herself at the end for Connor when she could have walked away... wow. What else is there to say? It was a wonderful story! Bravo!
Date: 07/23/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: epilogue
What a great story! I was a bit frustrated at first when she told him after their night in the abandoned house that she didn't love him - because I thought that we actually had more spuffy in the Joss-verse than your story- but as the story progressed I got over it. I really think you built a believable story arc and the character development was strong. I was so sad and depressed reading the angst ridden parts during their four month separation. I just loved there moment of clarity and reunion in her hotel. Outstanding dialogue . His words to her about how he bled inside - rivaled the original speech in ' Touched' as far as I was concerned. I hope you continue to produce more fabulous stories like this one. Thanks
Date: 03/15/2006 - 05:56 am Title: epilogue
Just found and read this story. One or two inconsistencies in plot which I see other reviewers have pointed out but didnt detract from my enjoyment. Well written and it would be nice to see a sequel.please
Date: 03/08/2006 - 07:42 am Title: epilogue
Beautiful story! I'm so glad that Buffy didn't get screwed over by the Powers. :P She deserves her reward.
Well done. :)
Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:45 pm Title: epilogue
Sniff, sob, goofy grins a s o. I thought this fic is a nice, long and satisfying make-belief variation of Joss' universe!
But there is one or two slips, I forget which chappies,. One is in Spike's snarking with Angel when they're discussing the right thing to do at W&H. It's when you're just citating the original phrasings, I think. He's referring to being burnt to a crisp and returning from that. Which you never let happen.
And then there's Buffy's dialouge with Whistler in Cleveland, when she say's something about two vampires dying and coming back, which in your story only applies to Angel. I point this out, because it's a pity, when everything else is mostly op to par!
Date: 11/01/2005 - 05:45 am Title: epilogue
What an amazing story. It made me cry. The only thing that shocked me was that Buffy didn't try to ask for more.
Date: 10/09/2005 - 07:39 am Title: epilogue
This is a wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it.
Date: 09/12/2005 - 07:04 am Title: epilogue
Fantastic story and written very well! Tremendous characterization of a wise and heroic Buffy. It was a pleasure to read it beginning to end.
Date: 09/05/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: epilogue
Brilliant story! Loved it!
Date: 09/04/2005 - 03:04 am Title: epilogue
absolutely loved it
Date: 09/04/2005 - 02:03 am Title: epilogue
Fantastic fic! The ending was perfect.