Date: 11/12/2013 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 9
Cute idea, but I think the writing could use some polish.
Author's Response: Yeah, this story is from a few years ago, my writing was obviously not as good back then. This is actually the rewritten version, you should have seen it when I first posted.
Date: 11/24/2005 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Something like this was bound to happen. Harmony just doesn't know when to stop and I don't know wheather to put it up to her stupidity, stubborness or both.
Date: 11/24/2005 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter 9
Harmony so sucks. I hope Ryan tells them that it was all a set up, and that Spike finds Buffy and reminds her how much he does love her. Great update, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11/24/2005 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter 9
i'm going to trust you when you say not to worry. i keep loving this story more and more. great work!
Date: 11/23/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well isn't that surprising...Harmony might be growing a heart! lol. Great chapter, I really hope Spike and Buffy can work this bump out. More please! :)
Date: 11/23/2005 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Date: 11/23/2005 - 09:33 am Title: Chapter 9
That's right - it's Thanksgiving this weekend? Happy thanksgiving then!
Oh my.. hopefully Spike can convince Buffy that Harmony set up a trap. And if they ask Ryan I'm sure he'll spill the secret (setting the trap) out.
Date: 11/23/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 9
great update but i really hate that harmony is butting in so much and i wished that everything in this chapter didnt happen