Date: 12/06/2005 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 15
well this was a good chapter but i thought that you rushed the love scene too fast and it wasnt very descriptive and long like i like them to be
Author's Response: Well, I can't please everyone. I know it was rushed and it probably really sucked, but I'm just bad at love scenes. I've been told that I can do NC-17 ones pretty well, but since this isn't, I guess I couldn't make it that good. I was trying to keep it clean and simple. And I figured people would get annoyed if I took too much longer for it. I know how you guys are for your Spuffy. I tried anyway and that's all anyone can do. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 15
All the build up, only to have possibly the lamest love scene ever!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Gee, thanks, really appreciate that. You should read an NC-17 fiction if you want something better. That was the best I could give. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm happy with it and that's all that matters. Thanks for reading anyway.
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 15
Things are definitely getting better in the Summers household! :) And awww. Spuffy first time :) Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, at least someone likes it=)
Date: 12/05/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awe - loved the chapter. Even Joyce was nice and understanding now :)
Date: 12/05/2005 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 15
i really love this story, great chapter!
Date: 12/05/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ahhh that was sweet that Joyce didn't scream.....now she needs to take her daughter for the pill or the shot........LOL......now it's official, Spuffy......