I like that he defended her honor. It can be little scary when someone that close to you gets in a fight but who would continue to let someone they loved be verbally abused.

I like this chapter. Had a feeling Spike was gonna have to punch some butthead over the rumor Harmony spread. I liked this chapter. Love protective Spike.

Don't forget - your fic - you write. If people don't like it they can stop reading! I looking forward to read on - good to hear you don't quit :)

I like that Harmony had a change of heart! People are not two dimensional, especially siblings and by making her nicer you've made her much more real. Sister relationships are not black and white at all! Can't wait to see what you do with the story!

It's your story and your vision and you should do what you want with it...don't worry about what we think; you do what you feel is right for it. You're the author after all! Please don't pander to the ones who complain about every little thing -- if they want to make it their story, then they can write one themselves. What you've done is great and as long as you feel good about it, that's all that matters. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I always love all of your reviews. Just like I love all of your stories. I will continue to do what I want, until I have nothing else to write. I'm glad you like it because you know I'm such a huge fan of yours, so I really appreciate it=)

Hmm there needs to be some sort of conflict, since you decided to remove Harmony (in the long run I think it's good) you need to add something else. Don't have a clue as to what but something that tests their relationship but in the end brings them together stronger.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm working on that. Even though this fiction wasn't supposed to be filled with angst, I do agree that it needs some conflict. Nothing too bad, of course. I just haven't been able to think of anything yet, but I'm sure something will come to me. Thanks for reading=)

Aww how sweet. Spike stood up for her. I'm hoping she's not too mad at him for what he did. Great chapter, I'm loving the story.

I'm very interested in this story. And no, last chapter wasn't bad at all. I felt it was a nice twist that Harmony could actually change her ways and try to be a better sister for Buffy and Dawn. I loved this chapter, too, especially how protective Spike was of Buffy. I just hope she isn't scared of him now. More, please?