I'm really enjoying the story so far. I can kinda relate to Spike in many ways especially in ch 6 when they're dancing and he tells Buffy how right it feels for her to be in his arms. It's the way I felt when I first held my girl, also how quickly he falls in love with her. Loving the way you're portraying Harm and I would of never thought of seeing her with Riley, but it works.



I love this chapter. When Spike suggested they get the yard for Drusilla to run around in, couldn't help but picture vamped out Dru running in circles on the grass lol... I wasn't expecting Buffy to get shot, that was a surprise.. and though I'm a big fan of angst I can't wait till you get back to the fluffiness.

Author's Response: Thanks for deciding to read this, I'm glad you're liking it. I'm actually not that good with angst, I would take the fluffiness any day. So, I will be getting back to that and hopefully won't take forever with it. Thanks for reading=)

Uh-huh.. with your A/N I feared what would come. So the chapter was light at the begin (funny) and then Buffy was shot! Hopefully not too bad! Happy New Year again :)

Lordy, man......man her luck since dating Spike as really ran out........lies, stalker, now shot.......naughty cliffy to take us into the New Year.......

noooo!!!!! you can't leave it there. more please. she has to be okay. soon please more.

Oh God..Poor Buffy!
The whole talk of the future between Spike and Buffy got me thinking that it wouldn't be a bad way to end this story..A baby comes into the picture( maybe when Buffy is in the hospital..they find out she's pregnant for real) ..everything works out and they live happily ever after.. : D ... I'm sorry, I'm such a sucker for those type of happy endings.
You've done such a great job with these characters..they deserve to end happily ever after. (I'm sure you will do great however you decide to finish it) I'll miss this fic when it's done! :(

~Happy New Year!~

I loved the chapter, their conversation at the beginning was so sweet, all the talk about the future was really great. And then, the last part was intense, very well-written, one could feel the desperation of the man that tried to robbed them, but now I'm all worried for Buffy. So, please, pretty please, make it better soon?

Happy New Year for you, too!

Mari

please dont let her die

awesome chapter, you have nothing to be worried about it was great. Can't wait to see what happens next