OK..ya got the hear wrentching down..Glad Spike got a good butt kicking in on the shooter..
Starting to get worried about Buffy though..is she gonna pull out of this one or not? Feel so bad for Spike.. : (
Thanks for the update!

ahhh she has to wake up soon!!! well atleast the guy turned himself in pfft well really want to read the next chapter so please update soon!!!! tara

poor spike, i really hope everything turns out alright

http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=stop_plagiarism For future use.

Good that you noticed!
Oh? Buffy is in coma? But at last alive! Looking forward to the next chapter.

okay, now add coman to the list......you know after this nothing bad can happen to them for at least 50 years........LOL

Aww poor Spike blaming himself for what happened. It wasn't his fault he was just trying to protect her, and it's so sweet that he wants to be there when she wakes up, hopefully it won't be too long.
About your a/n I'm so sorry that happened to you, it totally sucks bum when someone does that (or attemps to) I hope everything works out and hopefully that person realizes that they can't do that and get away with it.

Author's Response: Spike will have a hard time, but things will get better soon. As for the other thing, everything is a little better now. She has already been dealt with and I just hope I won't have to worry about this again, thanks.

Great chapter! I feel bad for Spike thinking it's his fault. I hope she wakes up soon!

Great chapter, although I'm a little nervous! I'll be waiting with bated breath to see how this turns out.

I'm sorry to hear about what happened to you. But you know what you're abilities are (as a writer and a person)... that person has to live with herself , knowing what she did (or tried to do).

Author's Response: No need to be nervous, everything will work out. Thanks, glad you liked the chapter.

I can't say I'm not glad that we get to see a little more angst it's what makes the fluf even better. Hopefully when Buffy wakes up she can reasure Spike that it wasn't his fault, 'cause I can only imagine how guilty he feels.

I'm really sorry that that happened to you. I know what it feels like when someone takes something that you worked really hard on and claims it as their own. but it's a risk we all take when we share a part of us with the internet world. *crosses fingers* here's hoping everything works out.

Author's Response: Thank you, it has been dealt with. She will be deleted and hopefully never to try this again. I just never thought that this would happen to me. I've had a few ideas taken before, but never an entire story. It's just really ridiculous that people have to do that and they think that no one would notice. Anyway, I'm glad you still like the story.

I'm really enjoying the story so far. I can kinda relate to Spike in many ways especially in ch 6 when they're dancing and he tells Buffy how right it feels for her to be in his arms. It's the way I felt when I first held my girl, also how quickly he falls in love with her. Loving the way you're portraying Harm and I would of never thought of seeing her with Riley, but it works.



I love this chapter. When Spike suggested they get the yard for Drusilla to run around in, couldn't help but picture vamped out Dru running in circles on the grass lol... I wasn't expecting Buffy to get shot, that was a surprise.. and though I'm a big fan of angst I can't wait till you get back to the fluffiness.

Author's Response: Thanks for deciding to read this, I'm glad you're liking it. I'm actually not that good with angst, I would take the fluffiness any day. So, I will be getting back to that and hopefully won't take forever with it. Thanks for reading=)

Uh-huh.. with your A/N I feared what would come. So the chapter was light at the begin (funny) and then Buffy was shot! Hopefully not too bad! Happy New Year again :)

Lordy, man......man her luck since dating Spike as really ran out........lies, stalker, now shot.......naughty cliffy to take us into the New Year.......

noooo!!!!! you can't leave it there. more please. she has to be okay. soon please more.