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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2010 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

really sweet. i liked it a lot actually. the emotions and the confession were wonderful and victorian :)

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

You say that writing Buffy as a prostiute would be easy...but let me jsut say even things close to that are actually pretty hard ;) And that's all I'm saying

You did really well with this though; you can write such sweet Spuffy stories..then yhou aslo did BR:SS that wasn't sweet but that I just love..so see, you're just great :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Stick with it, please, it will get really twisty! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

Poor Buffy - will get a prostitute next time! .. Love reading it. *gg* So Cecily owns a whore house this time? :) Cute this shy unsure Buffy. Looking forward to what you have in mind with this story.

Author's Response: I really do have a prostitute Buffy story in mind, but I have to finish my other fics first. Anyway, I hope I can make the twist somewhat believable for you readers! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

Yay, you updated!! Little nervous about what's to come, but I'm sure it'll be a fun ride :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Don't be too nervous, but there will be angst. Of course since this is a Spuffy fiction you know things have to turn out somewhat okay, right? spuf

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

i missed the first chapter, so i had to read both...awesome story!! i loved it!! can't wait for that twist... which i must say i've no idea what it is...even if you said there were clues, i was oblivious to them :S anyhow... can't wait for the next update!! please do so soon...the mistery is killind me :P

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to drop a few hint right here: Heavenly; 'feeling alive for the first time' are two hints. I hate to give away too much, so... spuf

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

Well, I for one think you did an awesome job with this, first times are really harder to write and this was sweet and tender and gave us a glimpse into what their life together will be. I can't wait to find out what the twist you're taunting us with is. More, please?

Author's Response: Thank you. I tend to write sex scenes sappy or a little bizzare. I try to write Buffy as a non-virgin in most of them in some way. However, being this time and era? I was kind of stuck. I say kind of because I could have actually had her be somewhat experienced, but that would be giving away part of the upcoming twist. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 08:44 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

I think you did a great job with William and Lizzy's wedding night. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. We have to remember the time and place of this fiction. People had many different ideas and thoughts on sex, but then again, maybe it's like my Grandmother told me: There's nothing new under the sun! spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

great story so far

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

I guess it's traditional, but it doesn't have to hurt the first time. It all depends on compatible...size, and how relaxed you are, and turned on.

Author's Response: True, I have heard various stories about this. Like I said, I can't even remember, so I guess it might be like child birth pain? LOL Thanks, spuf

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