I really liked this chapter - it really shows them being in love and being happy, but with the impending doom and fear of her secret.

I wish you well with your real life.

Man I was so happy to see this posted. I am glad that they are moving towards something. Or it seems as if they are moving towards something. And bringing all of their friends together. So domestic. Wonder what he bough and when he will give it to her.

dreading the bit where he realises the baby isn't his!!!
really enjoyed this chapter. liked the way you brought dawn into the story

Enjoyed the update. Glad you were able to post.

Very belated, but my sympathies. And hugs. I

'm skipping on to the next chappie now, and then hitting the sack. Thanks ever so.

Now, I don't normally read AU Fantasy stuff. It doesn't ring my bell. So why am I tearing off to the next chappie? Is a poser. *grins*

Happily out of my normal 'safe' zone and looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks ever so.

" Whispering words of love into the rich air their mingled breaths created, and keeping their pace deep and slow, they held tightly to each other as they reached mutual climax and came undone in arms, they both knew, would keep them safe for a lifetime." And, yet, with the deep feeling of connection, Buffy still doesn't trust this man. The sense of betrayal grows with every lie of omission. All the "I love yous" in the world can't erase each possessive rub of her growing belly, every thought that this family is his. This story is romantic, but the tension of the lie makes me anxious, too. Nice job.

Aww...Very sweet and emotional and uh...is it hot in here. I am so glad they waited until the timing was right. Now i just hope that once Williiam finds out the truth he will be able to see that though Buffy made a huge mistake, it was one she made before they fell in love. I also hope that she is the one who tells him, so he maybe can believe that the lie has been tearing her apart. Beautiful chapter as always!

Oh my god you always leave me with tears in my eyes after each chapter, but good tears :) It's such a sweet story which I probably have told you over and over again but still :)
Thank you for updating! Looking forward to the next chapter!

You write beautifully! Your characters have genuine sense of realness about them, which is hard to come by. Can't wait to read more!

I love this story so much. It is one of my favorites. I can't get enough of it.
It is always find it funny when someone always say that the Spike character wasn't like that on the show or that Xander wasn't like that on the show. But that is why this is a fanfiction. To make the characters the way you want them to.
But i'm not here to start arguments with anyone.
Anyways, I fear that Buffy is going to tell Spike the truth. And that Spike is going to find out in a bad way. Maybe, even find out after the baby is born and maybe even find out when the baby is a kid. I just keep thinking that their kid is going to get sick. And Spike finding out then that he isn't the biological father. Or maybe that Spike is going to overheard a conversation or something.
I don't know. I just keep thinking that Spike is going to find out in a bad way. And I keep thinking he is going to find out when the baby isn't a baby anymore.
If I'm right. Oh Buffy, that damage is going to hurtful.
Can't wait to read more.

I'm really glad to see an update on this fic, it's such a good one too. Well done and I hope you update again soon!