Date: 04/01/2013 - 02:41 am Title: part 5
please finish! i like this one
Date: 12/28/2010 - 03:13 pm Title: part 5
oh my heavens!!! i couldn't keep from laughing - I CAN'T BREATHE!!! and this is the second time i've read this one, too. without going too much into my life let's just so i have absolutely no knowledge of the stuff in the comedy routines in this delightul story - but i do have friends and family, and those relations love to TALK. so my ears aren't so um.. that thought even sounds gross. but you got the idea ...
truly, laugh-out-loud hysterical IN THE GOOD WAY!
Date: 06/25/2007 - 05:24 am Title: part 5
I like the bouncing back and forth between the comedy show scenes and the sexy scenes. Good job!
Date: 10/08/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: part 5
Update soon!
Date: 07/02/2005 - 05:17 pm Title: part 5
Maybe you lost the muse to create an ending to this story. I read it on another site. Maybe chpt. 5 is where it should end. But I would have loved a chapter 6.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 10:27 am Title: part 5
This story is great... even though I'm not crazy about humor mixed with my sex.... and yes I did know what it was about we I started. Here's the thing, I forgot to check and see if this was a WIP when I started. PLEASE update!
Date: 10/14/2004 - 06:39 am Title: part 5
IT kind of seems somewhat hypocritical to me that girls are always critical of guys who want them to "suck them off" but yet they expect those same guys to give them oral sex. Cum is cum.. Whether it is men's or women's The only thing different is the amount. And in fact studies have shown that there is more acid in women's than men's so if any person who should be griping it is them. But that is just me... I say if you expect him to do it for you, you should od it for him.. I love this story...kind of hard to follow but I eventually caught on.
Date: 07/16/2004 - 08:07 pm Title: part 5
I loved it! So I'm gonna sit here and wait for the next chapter (not really but I would if I could)
Date: 07/15/2004 - 10:53 pm Title: part 5
I doubt Gah... would be an original review, but it's all I have to offer right now... Again, a great mix of humour and sexiness--please, keep 'em coming! Uh, you can take that however you want ;)
Date: 07/15/2004 - 10:38 pm Title: part 5
Another fine chappy Patty.
Date: 07/15/2004 - 10:27 pm Title: part 5
very very curious to see what happens next