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Reviewer: Miz: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2016 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 11

Hah! Loved the commentary on Angel's 'do. Descriptive language really helped me follow the action like a movie in my head, you word doctor you. Particularly fond of Buffy "...twirling like a leaf from a tree...". Not anticlimactic: the big bad's not the big bad and you've alluded to a whole structure of big badness. I hurled the fluffy blankie and cushion of comfort to one side and was hopping from foot ... until Buffy saw Spike's bumpiest and broke. Loving Tara by the way. Right (straightens glasses and sits back down) ... onwards!



Author's Response: So glad you liked this. This is really kind.

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 11

well this is definitely different than i thought. i mean angel's already gone, but lacy did say that buffy is a player in a much bigger game so maybe that's it? still i feel so awful for the shattered girl as she saw the man she loves as a monster. also how did angel know all that stuff about buffy and spike intimately? was he there? did he have spies? craziness!!!

Author's Response: Angel knew all the intimate stuff in their lives because Lacy can read Spike's mind. She showed Angel everything going on between them magically.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2011 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 11

That went easy but Angel wasn't an old vampire. It felt strange that Lacy would sacrifice herself.

Author's Response: It was strange that Lacy would sacrifice herself. That comes into play much, much later.

Reviewer: Miss M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2011 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 11

"his bones were breaking but still Angel's hair did not move" *titter*

Author's Response: Angel's stupid hair, always good for a laugh!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter 11

"His bones were breaking but Angel’s hair still did not move." Hehe... Love that. And I love Buffy's collapse at the end. Lost her lover in some sense, and her reason to fight all in the same day. Pretty intense. Even if she was victorious.

Author's Response: Thank you! The reality of the situation really sapped the victory of its impact. That was all Joss Whedon, he loves doing that and I was straight up copying.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2011 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 11

Just found your fic and couldn't put it down! Love it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've written other stuff, would love to hear what you think! Hope you continue enjoying it.

Reviewer: Behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 11

Minx, you are your own worse critic! I absolutely love your writing, and for your first fight scene--great! Looking forward to how Tara is able to help Buffy

Author's Response: Thank you! You're always so kind. I love your writing, too.

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2011 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love this story, my new fav!

Author's Response: You're super-nice! You're so nice you deserve a Graduate-style shouting of your name. Here goes: ELAINE!!!!! ELAINE!!!! ELAINE!!! Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: a Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2011 - 08:33 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh! Oh, poor Buffy. I hope Tara can get through to her.

Author's Response: It's going to be a rough go of things for Buffy, but I can tell you she doesn't dust Spike on the spot. Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: wilcorules Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2011 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter 11

I think you hit the nail right on the head. A bit anti-climactic. I feel like we had just found out about Angel, expecting him to be the Big Bad of this piece, and now he is dead. And I'm wondering what is going on.

I think there is another Big Bad, maybe, it was hinted at, but I'm not sure. And the only one that might have enlightened me is also dead, and I never got a grasp of what her motivations were (Lacy - although I realize she loved Willow).

I thought the fight scene was good. I like the concept of the tattoos linking Spike and Tara's souls. I think I'm just getting a little turned around in the plot twists with the vampires.

I hope this doesn't sound harsh. I don't mean it to sound that way at all. I love your stories! I think you are a wonderful writer. I'm not very good at giving constructive criticism, when I'm not a writer myself. Just a longtime reader.

Author's Response: It's not harsh at all, I appreciate your comments a lot.And you are good at the constructive criticism, you never called me dirt bag or told me to give up on my dreams like my primary school teachers did. (Joke! They were lovely people.) Honestly though, I appreciate it, and will suss out more of Lacy's character in later chapters. I do have a plan for the Big, Big bad, and hope it's not too annoying a plot twist. I'm glad the tattoo concept wasn't too wack-a-doodle.

Author's Response: Anyway, my husband also had a problem with Lacy's character, and didn't quite buy her motivations in the story. I thought I could rewrite it, or maybe I could leave it in as a great, big whopping clue for the astute reader. So, good job astute reader. The next few chapters will have more explanations and a slower pace, we'll deal with the fall out for Buffy in dealing with Spike's vampire nature and hopefully it won't be too exposition heavy. Again, I don't just appreciate your criticism, I treasure it. Thank you.

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2011 - 04:33 am Title: Chapter 11

You always know when a story is great when you are left wanting more. Really enjoying this highly original fic. Can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment, and glad you're finding it to be unique. There is such a wealth of this stuff, it's extremely high praise to hear that you're finding the piece original.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2011 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 11

'''''''''His bones were breaking but Angel’s hair still did not move.''''''''' LOL! i loved that part! :D
nope.. wasn't an anticlimax...more like the end of a chapter of a certain point in life. Spike is no longer a human, and now that chapter is opened.
Poor Buffy... she gets rid of one lover who made her life a hell, only to discover her love had been turned into the same monster as the previous one. I hope him having sould would put her at ease at least a little bit.
Love Tara's character, always did. she kinda makes things calmer..
can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for all the kind words, hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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