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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2012 - 07:23 am Title: Surprises

Pretty good story! Has some need for editing to be truly great. I do like that Buffy defended herself, but the domestic violence/rape/Spike's retaliation seemed rushed overall. But I understand it's hard to get through so much heavy subject matter and keep the story a romance... I think I'd have toned down the abuse/rape stuff and left Riley's big villainy to be what he did to Angel. That way, one doesn't question why Buffy, if she's so strong-willed, would let Riley get away withall that (the explanation in the story was a little thin). But overall, good story.

Reviewer: riz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2012 - 01:37 am Title: Surprises

loved it!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2010 - 10:06 pm Title: Surprises

Oh, I absolutely loved the ending. What a good story. It had me worried here and there but ending perfectly.

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2009 - 04:33 am Title: Surprises

oh..what a lovely ending!

Reviewer: Olinka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2008 - 05:00 am Title: Surprises

Another great story from Ashlee :) What I liked the most is that Buffy wasn't a damsel in distress but rather gave Riley everything she got, without Spike's help.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 01:54 am Title: Surprises

I'm glad you decided to post it, it was a lovley story. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2006 - 07:23 pm Title: Surprises

This story is fabolous

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 04:06 pm Title: Surprises

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! *sniffle-sniffle! wow awesome story!!

Reviewer: DaniD. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: Surprises

LOVE THIS STORY! Great job Ashlee!

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 08:10 am Title: Surprises

Thanks Ashlee for another great story! :D

Reviewer: Shela Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2005 - 09:14 pm Title: Surprises

I don't know. It was good, but kind of too corny to have the Riley beating Buffy scenes in and I guess the writing could have abeen a bit stronger along with the plot. I guess the story just didn't do it for me. I'm more into the melodramatic, drug-addict, depressing stories with the dramtic writing like what Mrs. Muir writes. But, I suppose anybody who's into the happy-happy-joy-joy type would really like this story. But, I was pleased to see good grammar. I'm a grammar addict! Bad quotations, spelling, ect. just drives me up the wall.

Reviewer: Jinger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 - 09:29 am Title: Surprises

*tear & a big smile* I love happy endings!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2004 - 07:03 am Title: Surprises

loved it....will there be a sequel?

Author's Response: Sorry, no plans for a sequel. I think the story has run its course, but I'm happy you like it!

Reviewer: mely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2004 - 08:58 pm Title: Surprises

aww, that was so sweet. great story, loved how it ended

Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2004 - 09:08 pm Title: Surprises

awwwwwwwwww I loved it. *sighs happily* nothing better than sweet spuffyness.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2004 - 08:50 pm Title: Surprises

That was a really sweet ending. :)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2004 - 08:22 pm Title: Surprises

Such a sweet ending. Your fics ( and there seems to be lots on the go - dont know how you do it) are a enjoy pleasure to read! Thanks

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2004 - 08:02 pm Title: Surprises

Well, that was a beautiful end, to a wonderful stor. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2004 - 07:09 pm Title: Surprises

Oh, another lovely fic comming to an end. I loved reading it. And loved the end. Going to read the other fic of yours now. Cordykitten

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