Date: 09/10/2012 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
This is a very sweet, fluffy Spuffy story.
There are some grammar/word errors, and some dialogue quirks that could use some editing, and yes, the love story and the resolutions to the other problems/conflicts happen very quickly, but I still enjoyed this fantasy very much.
Date: 06/07/2010 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
great story!!
Date: 06/01/2010 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Another two years have come and gone... and I still enjoy reading this piece. Thank You :)
Date: 06/22/2008 - 09:14 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Awesome story, I LOVED it!!!! :) You did an Amazing job on Spuffy, plus VERY Hot scenes too!!!! :) Again, Awesome job/story and Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!! :)
Take Care,
Amber :)
Date: 06/10/2008 - 07:07 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
just wanted to say... still haven't found an All-human story i like better.
Date: 05/19/2008 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Kimber,
I send you much praise for this story. It was heart warming and had a beautiful story line. The last 4 paragraphs really hit home. They were beautiful written and brought tears to my eyes. I cant wait to read another of your stories for you are truely gifted. Never stop writing, it seems that you have a great passion that shows in your words.
Katie
Date: 07/04/2007 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
What an awesome story, I loved the ending!
Date: 02/26/2007 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I realy love this story it's a real fluff and it's II have no words for how baeutiful it is
Date: 01/21/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
An enjoyable story. I kept picturing Maggie Walsh when you called her stepmother Maggie, though and that didn't really fit the story. There were a number of places that needed some help with the grammar and though a minor issue, it did detract from the flow of the story somewhat. The characterization was good and I enjoyed the flufffy relationship that was there from the onset. It was unusual to read a story of this length and yet have none of the angst of the story be between Buffy and Spike, but all from outer sources. It still worked well for you. Thanks for writing.
Date: 12/19/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
This is efulgent I have no other words.
Date: 11/05/2006 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Beautiful ending. It made me cry. I absolutely adored reading this fic--it was perfect.
Date: 07/18/2006 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
WHOWW.. that was the greatest ending i have ever read,,, wowowwowowww wonderful closure :DD
looking forward to more of your writing
Date: 04/12/2006 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
One word: Beautiful. i don't write spuffy, i just read. and this has defiantly got to be number 1 on my list, unless i find one i like better. And i highly doubt that. You're an amazing writer.
Date: 06/26/2005 - 12:39 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
wonderful , well writen story!
Date: 05/27/2005 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
I loved it. very touching
Date: 04/29/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
This was a great story. I'm glad that everything worked out for those that deserved it.
Date: 03/20/2005 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
WOW. absolutely wonderful story, perfect amount of violence, angst and sappy spuffy goodness. superb ending, too. I loved it, one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. Thanks for writing it!
Date: 01/31/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
that was one of the most beatuiful endings i have ever read. i loved how the whole thing turned out. you did a great job writing this story. i hope that i get to read more great spuffy stories from you in the future.
Date: 01/31/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
that was one of the most beatuiful endings i have ever read. i loved how the whole thing turned out. you did a great job writing this story. i hope that i get to read more great spuffy stories from you in the future.
Date: 01/31/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Such a good ending! I picked out what I liked the best to you about this chapter....LOVE the Xander line lol. Glad that Hank came around and that Spike and Buffy have a circus going on. Great job. Thank you so much for what you said about me. You made me get all sappy! :) love ya babe
Date: 01/27/2005 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Aww that was a really good ending I hate to be just left at the wedding scene and then having to make up an ending but with this it gave me a very good ending and I hope to read more from you soon this was really a good story to read.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Good story. I loved it.
Date: 01/26/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
That was wonderful!
I loved the end. I hope to read another story from you. Thanks for writing!
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
thank you for the story i loved it from beginning to end
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Amazing!!!! Sad it had to end soo soon but loved it anyway