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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2012 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter Nine

Fantastic! And God bless you for using the right form of "bated" with regards to breath!

Reviewer: BloodStainedSnow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Nice sexual tension between them, and Anya is cracking me up :)

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine

couple of typos in there, nothing too serious though. its still good and I like it. Xander is stupid.

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Ohhhhhhhhhhh for all the gods I love Anya...she is just so level headed. Do I feel some juicy fun coming on. clicks to read the next chapter

Reviewer: bunnyhugs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2005 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter Nine

gr8 chap

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 - 10:48 am Title: Chapter Nine

I love this story :-) I loved Spike and Buffy's kiss and I can't wait for more where that came from! Absolutely great story.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter Nine

I love it!! Hehe, the UST is amazing, and so is Anya's bluntness...gotta say, this story is getting better and better the more chapters we get! Can't wait for the next one!!!!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter Nine

nooooo why did u end it like that. i want more. i love this story and LOVE reading the updates there so great and interesting. this is one of my favorite stories and i cant wait to read more. please update asap dying to no wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter Nine

great update

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Nine

wahooo get on with the spuffy lovin'! very hot keep it going!

Reviewer: Niamh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Whole lot of UST going on . How did she put it? Spike kissed her like he fought -- with everything. Oh yeah. Love that description. I like the uncertainty also. . . is ths Elizabeth and William or is this Buffy and Spike?. . . nice way to show the differences between the two pairs of lovers. And yeah, I'm sure they are gonna get there, after all, they are stuck in a romance novel. Anya, kicking up her heels to sit back and read. . . now if we could only get her to keep quiet about what she's reading, then our favorite couple will get lucky.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Worth the wait (as are all you tales). This is such fun (I bet you're having fun writing it too). Anya is such a hoot (always like her character) the way she just blatantly says whatever... wherever. I hope they don't get rescued too soon! Thanks for writing this and sharing it - it's truly entertaining!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Nine

It kinda makes me sad that they found the book. Though leave it to Anya to get rapped up in Buffy and Spikes major UST. Really would not be surprised if thats the first thing they decide to fix when they become Buffy and Spike again. Think its pretty ingenious the way the book is writing itself. And how funny is it that Anyanka knew of William the Bloody Awful Poet?! Love this story. Hope those papers and exams went well. Update when you can.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Great chapter. What will happen next? I can't wait.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I know it's difficult to write and update when you're a student, so take your time:) I love the indirect mention of Cecily/Halfrek that Anya had, and the different mindsets between Buffy/Elizabeth and Spike/William are awesome!

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I LOVE this story!! It just makes me get a big grin on my face every time I read a new chapter. THANK YOU!!!!! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Damn, that scene in the water was hot. Anya's right, those two are about to pop. Or collide. Or combust. So glad that Anya's the one reading the book and not one of the other scoobs. So convenient how Buffy and Spike aren't sweaty, dirty, hungry, messy, etc. Great detail, extending the world of fiction to their appearance and situation. I can't wait to see how else William "takes care" of Elizabeth. Wonderful chapter again!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Great update. I love the part about not smelling and no morning breath.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter Nine

"Anya, that's great hon, but it's not relevant to Buffy or Spike"... tee! Loved that line, just like I'm loving this story. Keep updating whenever you can--these chapters are like candy :)

Reviewer: Demonica MIlls Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter Nine

I love this story the more you write it. LOL. They had tussled hair, gotta love romance novels. Way to go with the sexual tension there :) Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Pattie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter Nine

Hi! Just wanted to tell you how much I've been enjoying your story. Cant wait for more!!! I know, I'm greedy....Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 09:59 am Title: Chapter Nine

oh - every chapter is worth the wait. Looking forward to read more. Wonder who will there be often - Elisabeth and WIlliam or Buffy and Spike. lol - at last Anya is enjoying there story :-)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Nine

Great story! More, please :)

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter Nine

Great chapter, I still can't imagine Spike with long hair. Pretty please update soon, oh by the way yipee this is my 50th review.

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