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Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2005 - 12:21 pm Title: 2

Oh Man I am loving this story so far, you have the characters so right on, all of them...This Is incredibly written :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2005 - 04:09 am Title: 2

Giles in a baby!. Giles has a baby... wonder who he knocked up. Love how Spikes been all Mr. Dad up until the diaper change.

Reviewer: AmyBnNYC Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 01:23 am Title: 2

OK, first for Ravenesque--I'm really enjoying this... I love the setup and the fact that everyone's so tense around the baby except Spike. This made me laugh out loud, so thank you from the bottom of my heart for brightening my day. Now, for reviewer Tammy: I get that you're opinionated when you review, but writing doesn't necessarily mean opening yourself up for every hack with an axe to grind. If you don't like Raven's set-up or her story, you can a) not read it (shudder gasp!) or you can b) write one of your own. It takes a lot to put yourself out there like this for no other reward than hoping that you've made someone else happy. And as for your 'constructive' criticism: Buffy did tend to be fairly territorial of Giles in a he was her father-figure kind of way, which is what I understood Raven to be implying. Teenage girls may like the idea of a baby in the cooing over someone else's sense, but one dropped in their laps for them to take care of: not so much. Especially since Buffy was never exactly what could be called maternal. And finally, I would imagine that Giles is just as capable of a one-night stand as anyone, and the fact that every detail of the plot isn't laid out in the first chapter is called story development. Raven, keep up with the good work, and thank you for your efforts. I enjoyed them very much.

Reviewer: Always_jbj Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2005 - 12:21 am Title: 2

LOL...I loved it!!! That is one very clever vampire! Fabulous plot idea...keep goin...please!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 11:29 pm Title: 2

Yes, I really enjoyed reading it :-D

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: 2

So funny, so sexy, so everything ! More please!

Reviewer: raemcn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 03:39 pm Title: 2

Absolutely love the humor of this story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Jessi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: 2

I can't wait for the next chapter. I think that this story rocks so far. Keep writing.

Reviewer: Mefiant Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 09:51 am Title: 2

Loving this fic so far...especially the nappy changing bit...

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 06:04 am Title: 2

can't wait for them to get spike back!

Reviewer: karen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 05:03 am Title: 2

wow,what a great story!!! I'm so glad i stumbled onto this little gem. I'll be keeping an eye on this one, you can be sure!

Reviewer: HollyDB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 05:02 am Title: 2

Wow! Thanks for the speedy update! How about another one for tomorrow, hmmmm? ^.~

Reviewer: Melissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 04:36 am Title: 2

haha spikes smart. poor giles. but spike was right about keepin his lil member in his pants. more guys should be told that. lol great chapter.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 04:13 am Title: 2

Great start. Lots of humor potential with this one.

Reviewer: CopyKween Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 03:27 am Title: 2

"that oozing sex he called a voice" haha.....love that line. Can't wait for ol' Spikey to change some poopy pants.

Reviewer: Bloodshedbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:44 am Title: 2

ok, I already reviewed this chapter, but since I needed another laugh, I read this fic again and thus read the reviews. Oh, and I signed in so I wouldn't be the old 'anon" reviewer. TAMMY. Quite honestly, there was no reason for the type of review you just left. Do you KNOW all it can take is one review that hits a writer on a bad day, and they can just say FUCK IT and bail on a fic or writing all together? Or is that what you are looking for? This is not angst, this is a tongue in cheek fic, the girls are SUPPOSED to be annoying. how could Spike be the all knowing guy if they were all calm, cool and collected? So go ahead, be as opinionated as you feel you need to be, But don't expect fic writers to just sit and take it, because believe, as a group? We're getting damn sick of it.

Reviewer: Starshine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:42 am Title: 2

It really lovely to have a story around that just grabs your attention so well. Awesome job more soon please!!

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:33 am Title: 2

LoL, omg! This story is fast becoming my favorite comedic relief. I LOVE how you write season 4. This would fit perfectly into what the BtVS writers gave us. You have a true gift for dialogue, description, and comedic timing. Spike's reaction to Buffy telling him he is going to be singing her to sleep had me laughing out loud! Oh, poor conflicted, hornball Spike. My god, I would pay to see this story on television. Love it!

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:29 am Title: 2

Okay, I have to comment about this: “That is so not possible,” Buffy barged right in, her body tensing with a strange form of jealousy. Giles was hers…where did he get time to go and find someone else to be with? I'm sorry, but that sounds like Buffy has a thing for Giles. I know that's probably not where you were going, but that's what I'm seeing and I was a bit disturbed by it. I think it could have been put differently. Also, I'm confused on the whole Giles having a kid thing. Is it Olivia's or did you make up another person? Hopefully that would all be explained soon. It is interesting so far and I have to admit funny. I don't really like how the girls are acting though. They're kind of annoying, especially Buffy. And even if you're not British it would be common sense to guess what knickers are. Girls shouldn't be that weird around babies. I feel bad that Giles got abandoned and has to deal with it on his own, but then again I suppose it is his responsibility. Okay, think that's all I had to say. I tend to be very opinionated when I review and I always speak my mind. So, sorry if I offended you or anything. I guess when you write stories you have to take some criticism. Interested to read more.

Reviewer: Rain Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:11 am Title: 2

Very very cute story. I like how Willow was all in denial. Very classic. And Spike hiding in the bathroom was priceless. My favoirite part was "Sitting on the Slayer’s bed, singing her suggestive rock songs while he got her off with the huskiness of his voice. Oh yeah, he could see real potential there.Buffy’s cheeks flushed hot as she imagined Spike sitting beside her bed, or better yet, on it and using that oozing sex he called a voice to lull her into the land of lusty dreams." Very sexy

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:10 am Title: 2

You've got a reviewer for life, dear! This chapter was fabulous! I like the fact that Spike left and didn't compromise his wants for their 'needs' LOL And having Spike sing Buffy to sleep would be classic!:)

Reviewer: Darla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 02:06 am Title: 2

Loved the chapter, can't wait to see where this is going

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 01:36 am Title: 2

Oh my god, this is priceless!!! "ding dong in his pants" that was hysterical!!!!! I just LOVE this type of Spike, the one that's not as evil as he really wants to be. Please more!

Reviewer: spikeslovebite Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 01:34 am Title: 2

don't blame everyone for bolting...i want someone to change my sons dirty nappies too!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2005 - 01:34 am Title: 2

loving it so far

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