You even have Andrew in the story! And Darla and so many more. I like it. And now Buffy is starting to notice Spike. I don't blame her. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the ensemble. It's fun trying to fit some of them in and challenging because I want to keep their canon characteristics, somewhat.

Loved the last line. And the phone call with Dawn was cute. I'm loving this story.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Okay, you've got me hooked with just the first chapter here. Not a story I would usually read, but the summary caught my interest and now I curious to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to take a chance and read a type of story you normally don't and that you are hooked. Thank you.

You make my day and make it impossible for me to stop writing fan fiction. :) Good to hear that.
Ah at last Buffy noticed Spike('s looks/vistas). LOL @ Carlos.
After your cryptic remark I'm looking even more forward to chapter six. :)
Enjoyed to read this one.

Author's Response: :) Glad you liked the Carlos moment. Thank you.

ooooooooo i really hope something happens between spike and buffy soon.... im loving it:)

Author's Response: Thank you. The pace picks up, now that introductions are out of the way. :)

I am usually a completed story fan, but I have been following some recently addeds and yours is definitely one of them. Am enjoying your portrayal of Spikes disdain for the whole scene, and the naivety of Buffy. Love to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I prefer to read completed stories as well, so I understand where you are coming from and take it as high compliment that you are reading my WIP. I'm thrilled that you are and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :)

Yay! I knew Spike had to be entranced upon first sight!!!

Author's Response: :) Yes. Thanks for reading.

Dawn being completely self absorbed was hilarious. I loved this"...but please, whatever you do, stay long enough in the game to get that home visit, ‘cause I wanna be on TV."

Not ever having watched one of these shows, you're doing an excellent job pulling me into the action. Buffy's already standing out among the other eager contestants.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked my version of Dawn. :) And it's great that you can enjoy the story without having seen the TV show! *hugs*

you are writing chappie 12?!?!? but only have 4 posted.. feed my adiciton PUHLEASE

Author's Response: LOL! I'm so glad you are addicted to the story. The reason I have so much written is because I got addicted to the story too. I wrote the first three chapters in one night! I promise to post each chapter as soon as they are seen by my betas and returned. I want to turn out good product so my betas are a must!

Liking this story, although not really familiar with the concept, we don't have it on UK TV, but guessing there is some kind of elimination, daily or weekly. Do the girls live together in a house until they are eliminated? or do they get to go home?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it even though you've never seen this show. In the next few chapters coming up, I sort of layout the way the show works. I didn't want to put an info dump anywhere, so I've tried to spread out the details. They do stay in the Bachelor House. Each episode covers a week. The first epi, covered just the first night and the most girls are eliminated. It goes from 25 to 15. Only the girls that the Bachelor choose to give a rose out to can stay. There are a set limit of roses he can give out each week. Once he gets down to a smaller number of girls, he'll go and meet their families.

Haha, trust Faith to be the one to show up to the first night in pants. Gotta love her. And Harmony's going to be the one girl on the show that keeps causing trouble and is a total brat but for some reason manages to stay on the show FOREVER, isn't she? Joy..........

Can I also say that you are officially my FAVORITE person for having so many chapters of this story done already? I am looking forward to a lot of Spike/ Buffy interaction in my future!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS That's funny that Naomi's family lives near you. Her mom was quite a character. Molly is actually from my hometown.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my Faith. I won't spoil it for you and tell you how long Harmony lasts. I'm really big on making sure I complete my stories, having been a reader long before I started writing. It's so disheartening to start a story and then be left hanging when the author can't finish for some reason. So, I make sure to have a lot of my story finished in rough draft and a clear idea of the end before I start posting. I'm proud to say, I've finished every story I've started. How funny that we each had a bachelorette in our hometowns who made if for enough for a home visit. I was rooting for the Canadian girl and was sad to see her go. I'm not too sure the other two are that serious about it. The cheerleader could be Charisma Carpender's younger sister. She's nice like Charisma, a cheerleader and they look a like.

Good to hear that you're so far ahead :)
With Spike concentrating his camera on Buffy she'll be in the center of attention.
~ Enjoyed the new chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes, there will be a lot of Buffy shots coming editing time.

Good chappie. Buffy seems too normal for this show, and she really seems to like Angel alot. Hopefully that'll change soon when she really gets to know Spike. Angel seems to be a bit self centered and phony, but then again I don't like him so... Spike seems to like her already.

YAY that you have so many chapters done, that means regular updates for us! Thanx. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying really hard not to character bash, but I'm sure as you read the chapters, you'll get an idea which characters I liked best on the show. Spike being at the top of the list.