Date: 04/12/2012 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Two
Love. Characterization is great (boy that Buffy is always so blind and uppity, isn't she?). Good smut. I approve.
Date: 07/22/2009 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
This is really great. I've tried to leave other reviews but somehow they didn't take and I couldn't WAIT to get back to the story. Chapter one: loved Buffy when she came on to Giles! Chapter two: loved it when Buffy called him up on his saying "What does it take to get the Slayer to open her dimpled knees?" The dialogue is great - even Xander is in charactor - most writers seem to find it necessary to grind Xander into the dust - he's not so bad - for a racist! O.K., maybe the correct word is "speciesist", but whatever.
The point is this is really good. Very articulate for porn - and sexy, too.
Date: 04/23/2007 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter Two
I love how you threw in dialogue from the show. Buffy is like an undepressed version of her season six self. Letting him shag her senseless and then being all "Oh my God. I slept with Spike. It's never gonna happen again."
Date: 01/17/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter Two
/gah. How you could walk away from that is beyond me. . . . coz he's like walking talking breathing sex. . . . and she's just a dope.
Date: 11/23/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Two
Lingering effects huh... I bet that's caused by a demon, but not the one she thinks it is... So go and state the obvious. Very lovely chapter.
Date: 09/04/2004 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oh My Goddess, you capture Spike and Buffy so very well, it was like watching the best episode ever!! I was laughing, very witty and right on. A very enjoyable read, thank you so much for sharing it here. Pari
Date: 08/27/2004 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Two
i absolutly love it so far
Date: 08/27/2004 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
I agree that Buffy wouldn't just accept falling into bed with Spike, She's got to resist a little. Enjoying your story, looking forward to updates.
Date: 08/27/2004 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Two
Again, a superb chapter. I feel bad for Spike, but I'm keeping my hopes up that Buffy realizes what she could have with him. Hey--if we don't live vicariously through fanfic, what other recourse do we have? :)
Date: 08/27/2004 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter Two
Quite honestly I like this Buffy best when she's not thinking. Not very femenist of me is it? Thanks for the update.
Date: 08/27/2004 - 11:32 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh my, doesn't she sound like a broken record. It's back to everything we hated about season 6. :P
Author's Response: Sorry you're hating it... I'm not working towards a season 6 type thing, I just figured Buffy wouldn't realistically just accept a relationship with Spike--especially since at this point in the show, he's never really given her a reason to! Give me a little more time, and it'll get better, I promise! :)
Date: 08/27/2004 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter Two
Yes - I liked it and would like to read more! Cordykitten