First of all, the school setting of this is outstandingly excellent.

Plus, the whole touch of Rupert being her new dad; that's a role I really do believe he would've gone to endless lengths to get- if he could legitimately, in any rendition of the story!

This story's spectacular and definitely should be continued, by yourself, the author of this wonderful piece of literature!

Sincerely a *very* pleased fan;

Palpatine.

I like this, especially her viewpoints and attitudes, not so much with her openness with swear-words, but that's *her*, not *you* the author... and you couldn't know, so why complain?

As per her character responses, I loved them, especially towards the slavery issue, with both women- I loved their responses.

As per Mike, the danger I'd say is not merely from her, but to a far greater degree from his master, the First, who, I'd say, is more than happy with implimenting the idea of enslaving HSTs, merely and intentionally to lower human restistance by getting us humans lazy and lax in our obligations to maintain ourselves.

All in all, I liked this a lot, and can't wait to see what'll happen next, oh, and so glad the pictures are back- that's another favorite of mine in this story's regard!

JustSue, you're doing a fantastic job with this piece of literary work!

DreamsofSpike; this's a general comment to you about your ideas for "Buffy gone bad" stories that you were, and are, so spectacular in writing and thinking up... please don't fight me, as I am not here to fight.

Quite the contrary, I mean to support you in your ventures; course, if say Buffy, or she might go by "Elizabeth Summers" for "Buffy" is a nickname for "Elizabeth", were to get a bit naughty with him (well, more than usual in your excellent stories), she might try a practice referred to by practicioners as "pegging", wherein she has her vampire sit on her lap facing away from her so that her (in this case) strap-on goes into his behind, and at the same time she'd be playing with his penis; all as a form of naughtiness... that's if she gets particularly wicked... which it seems she's prone to in your stories!

I liked this, particularly how you have her being tempted more than anything else in this chapter, so that was delightful to read.

All in all, this's a very promising tale of weird and naughty behavior on a young modern dame's part, I'm saddened that it looks as if this's it with the amount of Buffy the Vampire Slayer stories you're likely to write- the ones you've written thus far, based on other communiques between us over the years- as I think you're sheerly brilliant at writing her gone bad type stories.

Sincerely one of your fans for as long as possible- you've earned it, and sorry for not commenting more frequently to you, you make lovely Spuffy stories;

Call me "Palpatine" here, please, okay?

Pity that you elected to make this a one-shot, this is excellent, but extremely dark; as not only does it appear to depict suicide- thereby her actions play into her greatest adversary's hands among her adversary records, which are quite significant; but also she's the abuser in this dark tale!

All in all, I loved it! Thank you for writing this!

Sincerely one of your hopefully many fans;

Palpatine. 

You nailed exactly how messed-up they were in that relationship, my neighbor in this life; they are exactly that: an addiction to oneanother in this relationship.

This's wonderfully done work you've got here, dark, but wonderfully done work, quality-wise.