wonderful. I want a William. Loved it!
Harsh Light of Day rewrites is my kink, so this fic made me very happy :). It was sexy but the characterizations were still believable and not totally OOC. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Ash Anonymous! I particularly like Harsh Light myself. I absolutely love snarky, rude Spike. I'm glad you enjoyed!!!
Pretty hot... love the note!
Very very hot! Loved it.
that was HOT! and i love the end... so beautiful.. with the rose and all.. :)
Author's Response: Sweet, wasn't it?
Loved it. Need sequel.
Author's Response: Mmmm...maybe?
Loved it! Loved it Loved it Loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you loved it! Love sharing!!!
A good story with a hopeful ending.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Enjoyed this one, it was hot. :))
Though the other commenter was right about the invite I think. ~ Have you thought about doing another one (If I did another one shot to follow this one)?
Author's Response: My faux pas! Long story short, I thought her dorm room was like any public place that does not require an invitation. I was wrong. I fixed it! I'm glad that you enjoyed!
Such a sweet ending. I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
WOW....I mean....wow....truly amazing....shame it's only a one-shot.
Author's Response: *blush* I'm glad that you enjoyed!
hardly still foes to me, you wouldn't write a poem and give a rose to someone you considered an enemy. it would be nice to see a follow up to this.
Author's Response: This is Season 4, everything is still very black and white for both Buffy and Spike.
holy shit stick! that was hot!
and okay not to rain on the party - because what a party it was!! lol - but how did spike get in without an invite? just ragging on the details sorry. *ducks*
would very much love to see what happens next and where they go from here. just hope buffy doesnt listen to anyone of her "friends"or take their shite. thanks and hope there is more to come!
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out my faux pas. I originally thought that her dorm room would be like a hotel or another public place, which does not require an invitation. After your review, I watched The Yoko Factor, when Angel came to Buffy's dorm room. He required Buffy to invite him in. I needed to look there because in the Initiative, I clearly remember that the depressed Willow just called out to Spike to enter. Since she just said "come in" I wasn't too sure. The Yoko Factor clinched it. So with all that said, I fixed it and add two lines so Spike's permission to enter was granted. Thanks!
He will be back for more. Would love to see what happens then, too. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Of course he'll be back!
OMG!!! two updates in one day!! big thanks!! :D
Author's Response: You're welcome! I'm glad that you look forward to my stories!
Please continue this one!............
Author's Response: Mmm...maybe
okay, at least he had the decency to leave a note, but i don't get why he left her to wake up alone like parker did.
Author's Response: I like to believe that he went back and kicked Harmony out for good! If I did another one shot to follow this one, he would make up for leaving her...big time! Also, you have to remember, this is fourth season Spike...not the Buffy-whipped Spike. They are still foes!
you have fulfilled one of my favorite fantasies!!!! thank you thank you so much!! i absolutely love this episode and more love to dream about what could have been! aw sigh. so yes please keep the rewrites coming - they are so enjoyable.
Author's Response: *blush* that's all I can say!
Author's Response: *blush* thanks!
that was awesome and powerful. i loved it.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed!!!
*Squees and then falls back upon the bed with a huge goofy smile on her face* That was just 'awwww' worthy. Made my night.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear from you! I hope all is well!